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Shakespeare powerfully conveys the theme of ambition in Macbeth, establishing it as a destructive force from the outset. As Shakespeare writes, Macbeth is told to "look like the innocent flower, but be the serpent under't." This suggests that ambition corrupts moral integrity — the word "serpent" connotes deception and evil, implying that power-seeking transforms Macbeth into something sinister. The reader is made to feel unease, as the natural image of the flower is undermined by hidden danger. Overall, therefore, Shakespeare demonstrates that unchecked ambition inevitably leads to moral destruction, a central concern throughout the play.
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